You helped both of them craft a compelling Common App essay

I wanted to thank you once again for the help and guidance that you provided to B and H.  You helped both of them craft a compelling Common App essay which must have been well received. B ended up being accepted at Stanford and Vanderbilt as well and was offered a place in the Echols Scholar program and College Science Scholars program at UVA. Ultimately, she decided to join H at Yale!